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Good luck for the exams.

Thanks for chapter.

Maybe a better reason to save her this kind of reasoning usually ruin good novels. It could be a reasoning like 'since the princess is with him pursuer are going to kill him either way; so it is better to take her side'

Wasn't plot already ruined when Lucia survived?

Thank you for the chapter and I would definitely see the this battle scene as a shameless request. Thank you for giving this story, enjoying it so far. hugz

Something different for once.

I like your writing style and many others also do soo, so stick to what you like and enjoy while writing. You can skip some days that you don't fell well, fell comfortable while posting a chapter and continue writing. Hugz

Thanks for the chapter.

I would like to see Valeria if she appears more in mc life (more involved in story) otherwise Luke.

Though the english is bad, the story is interesting enough. I would also suggest to add traits to character while in conversations like being proud, arrogant, beings nervous, etc. Basically read guides for better writing. You can look up to other popular writing of same genre/tags to learn how to write.

Sure take your time, enjoying the series so far.

So, mc is using all 4 weapon. I wonder which will be his main?

A bow user for a change.