Webnovel Author: Cain_101 - Fanfic Collection

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Thanks For The Chapter Lemon itself was great even if I personally didn't like the development of the plot

and I before this Reina didn't come off as being THAT interested in him that she would ask this or speak like this so her also acting like this makes this whole scene unnatural or off putting

Well, until now the story was going great but this chapter kind of ruins it as his relationship with others before this were feeling natural but with Reina it kinds of feel forced or plot driven (I don't know how to word this) instead of being natural and Mizuto come off little scummy and hypocritical in this chapter as he is always saying that woman's will slow him down from achieving his ambition but in this chapter he is actively trying to get her and that feels like the author has broken his character a little; at least for me

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