Webnovel Author: David_Shandler - Novel Collection

Love the story and character design. I've also read a lot of Chinese webnovels. As I read the story, I couldn't help but feel like we used the same method to write. 😏

Start is good, characters are well built. Also vampires are one of my favorites, so I'm loving this book. I recommend giving this book a try.

Ngl, very good story. The only thing that i think the author could improve on is the writing quality, and I look forward to what's gonna happen later. I'd say that from now on spend more time making the language sound better and then go back and fix the chapters that you've already wrote. This has potential to be a really popular novel. 👍

Thanks! I'll definitely work on my intro.

Everything is decent, plot is very creative and the world's setting is interesting. Not cliché at all so definitely recommend trying out. 👍

Maybe give a power stone too..??

I am constantly trying to improve my writing, so if you have any suggestions or opinions, feel free to tell me. I don't care if they are good or bad, as long as they are true. Also, please leave some comments or a review, it will be highly appreciated. Thanks!