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RRMenon
male LV 1Just a young Indian bloke with a passion for writing. Started reading with the Percy Jackson series and then Harry Potter, Game of Thrones and Lord of the Rings. Preferred genre is Fantasy and Sci-fi.
2022-02-22 Joined IndiaBadges 4
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Lol they are not family. They are friends and neighbours.
Ray noticed that he still had his arms wrapped tightly around her waist. He quickly released his hold and jumped down from the roof of the car. He felt his cheeks grow steadily warmer, fully aware that the humidity had nothing to do with it. He cupped a hand over his lower face in an attempt to hide his embarrassment.
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Well I intended for the character to be self-absorbed and insufferable. I wanted to show that she was extremely materialistic and cares more about her phone than her life. You say that nobody would act like this but you'd actually be surprised how many people would do this in real life.
Samantha gasped, "Excuse me! This is an iPhone thirteen; it came out less than a month ago! You don't realize how much I had to fight with my Dad to get this."
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Hail evil Canada!
"True…" He looked at Ray anxiously, "It's honestly kinda scary. I was supposed to go to Canada for my diploma this year but with everything going on.... yeah, that didn't work out."
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Hey, sure we can connect on Discord: menoninblack#5738
Haha I don't know if that's a good or bad thing lol
ch 160 Passion and revenge
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Thank you. Corrected.
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Yes, they're sending texts. Hence, the abbreviations
Meghan: Yeah but I still don't see why though. At least u ll reach fast know?
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I never said my story is perfect either. This is my first written work so I'm well aware that there are issues with it. When I receive criticism that actually helps me improve it, I'm grateful. But you seem to think that the Deathless not being called zombies is somehow a huge issue. That isn't criticism. That's just your personal preference. So don't call me delusion just case I don't conform to your standards. Again, if you don't like it, don't read it.
"Oh, that." Ray began, "I play a lot of games. Most of them are Action or Fantasy. In a majority of the games I've played there are always enemies that are very similar to the Deathless. They are called zombies, ghouls, undead… different names depending on the game. But they all share one common factor. The best way to kill one is with a solid blow to the head. The brain is their only weak spot. Causing injury anywhere else is basically pointless."
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Whatever you choose to call them, the events of the story would go on the exact same way. That's the way I've designed the story. Whether the characters calls them zombies or not, doesn't matter one bit. Let's say Ray calls them zombies from the very start. Would literally any of the events of the story be effected? Yes, maybe the dialogues will. But none of the plot points. Again, your argument does not make sense to me.
"Oh, that." Ray began, "I play a lot of games. Most of them are Action or Fantasy. In a majority of the games I've played there are always enemies that are very similar to the Deathless. They are called zombies, ghouls, undead… different names depending on the game. But they all share one common factor. The best way to kill one is with a solid blow to the head. The brain is their only weak spot. Causing injury anywhere else is basically pointless."
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Noted, good sir. I shall keep this in mind for the next zombie apocalypse story I write.
"Oh, that." Ray began, "I play a lot of games. Most of them are Action or Fantasy. In a majority of the games I've played there are always enemies that are very similar to the Deathless. They are called zombies, ghouls, undead… different names depending on the game. But they all share one common factor. The best way to kill one is with a solid blow to the head. The brain is their only weak spot. Causing injury anywhere else is basically pointless."
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You're saying you want the characters to casually accept the fact that they are in the middle of a zombie apocalypse on the very first day? xD Are you for real man? This is supposed to be set in the real world. The whole concept of zombies is so insane that it boders on dark fantasy. Any normal human being would be in denial at the very beginning. You commented this on chapter 9 so I'm assuming that's all you read. All the 9 chapters you read takes place in like 2-3 hours. You expect everyone to just be woke and know exactly what to do in a situation they never faced before? And for your information, the Deathless aren't techically zombies. I have expanded that in later chapters. But you wouldn't know that since you're just 9 chapters in. So basically you're whole argument makes 0 sense.
"Oh, that." Ray began, "I play a lot of games. Most of them are Action or Fantasy. In a majority of the games I've played there are always enemies that are very similar to the Deathless. They are called zombies, ghouls, undead… different names depending on the game. But they all share one common factor. The best way to kill one is with a solid blow to the head. The brain is their only weak spot. Causing injury anywhere else is basically pointless."
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When a zombie outbreak happens you're telling me you'll just jump up and deal with it like it's every other Tuesday? Everyone in the story is ordinary people by the way. You talk as if a zombie apocalypse is nothing to worry about xD I don't get you mate. If you don't like the story don't read it. No one is forcing you.
"Oh, that." Ray began, "I play a lot of games. Most of them are Action or Fantasy. In a majority of the games I've played there are always enemies that are very similar to the Deathless. They are called zombies, ghouls, undead… different names depending on the game. But they all share one common factor. The best way to kill one is with a solid blow to the head. The brain is their only weak spot. Causing injury anywhere else is basically pointless."
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Ok let's say they figure out they're zombies. Is knowign that going to help them survive at all? Why are you so stuck up over such a small detail lol?
"Oh, that." Ray began, "I play a lot of games. Most of them are Action or Fantasy. In a majority of the games I've played there are always enemies that are very similar to the Deathless. They are called zombies, ghouls, undead… different names depending on the game. But they all share one common factor. The best way to kill one is with a solid blow to the head. The brain is their only weak spot. Causing injury anywhere else is basically pointless."
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You'll have to read and find out.
Their options were limited, their safety was at stake and they were gradually running out of time. It had to be done.
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No, the signal is bad. Most of her words are getting cut out.
"Range not good here." She said, "We're in an isolation room. Something horrible is happening. People are being attacked. The police are here too, they aren't letting us leave."
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They're friends.
"They aren't dead, Momo" He cut her off, "They can't be. They're just preoccupied with something. They'll call us back when they can. I'm sure of it."
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They should already have enough at Ray's place tbh
When she returned back to the living room, she had a big bag around her shoulders full of stuff she thought would come in handy. She had packed spare clothes, undergarments, her toothbrush, toothpaste, her towel, shower gel, shampoo, a few sanitary pads and her phone charger. Even though the bag was quite heavy already, it would have been even heavier if she had taken everything that she wanted.
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Don't worry, I'm only taking a break to sort out some personal stuff at home. I will definitely continue this series. Thank you for being patient with me. I promise to deliver good content in the next few weeks.
ch 174 Hospital bridge
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