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Deathilim_609
male LV 12I want to make a good book I can be proud of.
2022-02-23 Joined PhilippinesBadges 7
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Hello, I'm rather a new writer so I make some mistakes. But you don't have to worry about this particular one, the girl isn't a romantic interest. She serves a purpose way later in the plot.
"Can you bring along my granddaughter instead?"
I Became The Mafia Boss Inside The Novel
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Yeah, I'll update two chapters today if I can. I fell asleep due to tiredness earlier, sorry about that
ch 123 A Business Tactic (3)
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Currently in my exams, so I'll probably update by the end of the week.
ch 115 A Game of Hide and Seek (3)
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On discord. Can't put them in the app since the quality is high
ch 42 Expectations to the future.
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today
ch 113 A Game of Hide and Seek (1)
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Today
come back in start of December
ch 111 Three Major Aspects (2)
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Some concepts, notably the “extra is a mafia” concept was inspired by it. I think the only thing similar is the Corleone name, which is a real life thing and from the Godfather. Also the Club system which I really liked and changed a few things about it. Is there a problem?
ch 116 Combat Class (1)
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Indomitable Spirit is not a skill. It's a natural born talent.
[Talent: Indomitable Spirit — The embers of an unyielding spirit empowers the body in any situation, limitlessly.]
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Why was Elias not to be messed with? not because of his strength. But because of his people. Remove his subordinates from the equation, he's but a weak, little teenager.
"The information given was wrong… they didn't say you knew how to fight, you goddamn bastard."
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Under what rules do you think the former Elias couldn't get this talent?
[Talent: Indomitable Spirit — The embers of an unyielding spirit empowers the body in any situation, limitlessly.]
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Local crooks or criminals don't know much stuff about the mafia world. They only know the Castellano name. Elias is relatively unpopular because he was rarely involved in any of the Castellano business since he was a child.
"The information given was wrong… they didn't say you knew how to fight, you goddamn bastard."
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today
ch 111 Three Major Aspects (2)
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Rain was made by him, reference to his past when he killed his parents. Rain also killed his parents/people around him.
ch 109 Magic Theory (3)
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Wait for next chapter.
ch 112 Three Major Aspects (3)
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Thanks!
ch 114 A Game of Hide and Seek (2)
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No, sorry. My phone got resetted and all of my drafts were in there. I'll be uploading shortly this week
ch 123 A Business Tactic (3)
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