Webnovel Author: CarolineInPajama - Novel&Fanfic Collection

The novel is surprisingly good and addicting but the mc is just making me infuriated at the opportunities he's deliberately avoiding or even throwing it out with his dumb shit brain rotting reasoning, but I love the novel, keep up a good work Author-san! ... Fuck Lathel

Honestly, I'm just confused at what's even happening these past 30 chapters, what's with Sun only making a move after years of waiting, even though she fairly killed it easily, I'm just as confused at the character development and their interaction with each other but it's getting better as I read but goddamn the world background, is this even a VR game world? or Is this one of the games he played and died and got reincarnated into it? The grammar's pretty good though but I'm just confused about the development of the story, it's just making me not enjoy this novel at all, I don't even know what does the mc even looks like... but but but I'll say the Author has the potential to be a great writer because of your good imaginationn, try reading some great novels for a bit and see how they progressed their story and the character development too at least... It's not a fun experience reading this but it's not bad either, it's just an Ok Novel, hope your writing skills improve as you write cause u got the talent for it!Note that because of this problem, I didn't fully read each chapter so some of my complaints may be fairly inaccurate!

This is the most splendid novel I have ever read!The details, character designs and the world background are so properly executed, I even cried at some point at the mc's suffering because I'm so engrossed 🤧🤧The writing quality and Author's imagination are so engaging to read, it blew my mind that such a novel of this quality still exists today after reading countless brain-dead-end novels.Only the updates are pretty bad, since this novel is heavily underrated,But THAT quality in each chapter compensates for it.I hope you won't stop writing, just don't. Hope this novel and the Author get the attention they deserve!

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