CaptainBOO

10mth

Replied to Ronin46

Yeah, no offense to the author, but it is just to many of the same flowery words when sometimes it is better to be short and concise in the events that are happening. Still love the fic. One of the best I’ve read, and the concept really has me always waiting for the next chapter.

Harnessing the full extent of his power, Orion unleashed a final surge of energy, tearing the heart from the vampire's chest. The severed organ glowed with an otherworldly light, radiating an aura of retribution and justice. In the blink of an eye, flames erupted from Orion's hands, enveloping the heart in a blazing inferno.

TVD: The Tribrid Legacy

TV · ParadiseHeights

CaptainBOO

10mth

Posted

Really liked this fanfic, hope the author or someo else keeps the story going.

Mushoku Tensei: Reincarnated as Rudeus's older twin brother

Fantasy · Roxy_Greyrat21

CaptainBOO

11mth

Posted

I think that the story is very good and i like it a lot, even though i am more of a marvel man myself than dc. There are some spelling mistakes but don’t worry about it, just read it a couple of times before uploading it and try to fix the problems and it should be alright. Thanks for the story!!