Rewrite! DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan

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Skarlet_Retro

good setup so far and we been get a good image of his strength and character

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Demon_King22

Never thought I would write fan fiction. But here we are. As the author, it is an obligation that I rate it 5 stars. But I have been having fun writing this, so it is a 5/5 for me. Thanks for giving this humble creation a try, if you did. That's more than what I can ask for. :)

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Demiurge_Ohara

your English suck, one that requires multiple checks just to understand the scenes, it breaks the immersion, and the execution is so-so, the idea is noise but so far generic.idk why people rate it so high. It isn't even that good. average at best, unreadable at worst. (Y? again, your English is horrendous. )

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RemoteRomance

MC starts dumb and acts like a simp (also, get ready for the author to start talking about his tastes and over describing women) But in the late 30s chapter wise the MC finally starts acting like a saiyan and has some pride. Didnt like the story at first but now i am relatively interested. Keep up the good work.

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Kaitozc7

Great idea and potential storyline, but I will be honest here the grammar is a mess, I read chapter 4 to 7 and I have to read some sentences 2-3 times to understand what the author is trying to say.

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TFH

will wait..m authot has dropped over 10 novels, 1 reached higher than 60 and the others 20-30 chapters before being dropped.

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Privateminiarnold

Awesome story thanks for making it also love how you made him a doomsday clone

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The_man_The_myth

boku no pico was my first anime. amazing masterpiece, but the characters could be more consistent. in the first episode pico had an amazing character arc with his best buddy. sadly, the ice cream arc was too sad to watch for me so i couldn't see because of the tears i shed that fateful day. the second episode was even better with much more characters and worldbuilding that made every fan shook in their seat. the swimming arc had great CGI and i know they just took it from Michael Faps but the technology they used to produce it was otherworldly. There was also mindnubbing storytelling thst told the children watching to eat fruit such as bananas. The third episode was my favourite. beautiful animation and city landscape that looks like it was taken from Paris and painted by Leonardo di Caprisun. 10/10 MAL score, modern classic, hyped for new season!

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Cat_Tip

Bruh your updating status is harsh on my mind. I don’t know if I should even start enjoying this since it will prob get dropped.

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Melshan

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ali_mobile_gamer

I'm on chapter 35 the story started off shakey but kept getting better and better each chapter

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kovaksens

This is a very wonderful and creative work. Thank you for your efforts.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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ONGFRFR

this is one of the new good FF, so keep up the awesome work

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lntrusiveThoughts

Starts off a bit weak but really starts picking up. Writing this as of chapter 37 and really enjoying it so far

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TheGamer21

Great book with a lot of potential. Fairly new so not a lot of chapters, but it iz worth the wait

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UTGaster

The story does what a story should do, it feels good to read. Now if your expecting a perfect novel go to your local library, but if your looking for a entertaining read thats what your going to get here. Do wish it updated a little faster but I can accept and respect the current speed.

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RaizelRyuuto

Update more chapters for us poor people.

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Pedro_0000

Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood