I dropped the novel at chapter 309. Interesting concept and world building. But I have to drop it because of a certain character. The author create a fascinating character name Sera but handled her poorly. I dropped it not because of poor character development or something, in fact the book have good character development, I just hate the fact that the author ruined an interesting character and makes me hate selena even though the one at fault is the MC. What I hate about harem is when they are treated unfairly, this novel is one of the example of it. (Unlike Gacha Sovereign, can't believe it have the same authour since the harem in Gacha Sovereign handled nicely) If the MC can't handle a harem, it's better to only have one romantic interest, in fact, this novel is actually good if either the romantic interest is only Selena or if only the harem managed well and treated fairly. Though I will probably read it again in the future since as I said, it have an interesting concept, but for now, I have to refreshed my mind. Maybe in the future I wouldn't mind Nathan's treatment to Sera. Writing quality 3 stars - there are many mistakes in names and 'he' and 'she' but still bearable. Updating Stability 4 stars - it is consistent. Story development 5 stars - the phasing is neither slow nor fast just average, it actually suit my taste. Character design 1 star (if there is 0 star I will probably chose it) - handled sera poorly World background 3 stars - the setting is not that confusing but I can't imagine a world map.
Looks like I have to drop this novel. I tried to endure it since this novel have an interesting concept but I am at my limit, I can't take it anymore. Though I might read it again in the future when I somehow forget about how he treat sera since this novel is really good, I'm just disappointed on how the author ruined an interesting character. Even if I don't want it to happen, it makes me hate selena because of nathan. I hope the chapters after it, Nathan will treat sera fairly so that I won't remember why I dropped it. Then again, I'll read it again in the future (if I remember)
I actually didn't favor sera too much, I just feel like her character have wasted potential because of how Nathan treated her.
This is what I hate about Nathan. The unfair treatment. Suggesting Selena an actual sea goddess but a demon prince for sera? What he said is indeed logical but it is the author who decided it, so he could think in one way or another to suggest sera a higher ranking demon than a prince since he suggested an actual goddess to selena. My hate to selena just increase
Well, it is just my own opinion, don't mind it too much. I might be the only who find it annoying since there are no one complained about it. And this chapter was released 12 months ago, so I'm sure my comment doesn't really matter and their relationships already improve.
I'm starting to hate Selena because of how Nathan treat Sera. Sera is a fascinating character but the author handle her character poorly. Although I am not an author myself, I believe there is a better way to handle it than treating Sera like that. It actually doesn't make the characters good, rather Selena is starting to get annoying even the character at fault is Nathan.
lying? are you stupid or what? he clearly put which chapter it happened and you just have to f**king check it
only vrgin boy like you will enjoy this stupid book lol
oh, this bul***** is still ongoing? a bul***** book where the mc can't even control his harem and just let one of them have her own harem but the mc ended up taking them all but those girls still in relationships? lol the funny thing is that, the author once repost this book but never fix that issue and the fact the even at chapter 800+ (where I stop reading this bul*****) still not solve is the most outrageous part.
I just thought of something. Since dao of time and space are from stone of time. What is Long Han original dao for his qi and body? And soul if he had it.
Monarch of Time
Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian