Webnovel Author: DrAuthor - Fanfic Collection

maybe spice things up a bit, have a storm trooper as a reincarnated character, make him train to fight dirty, make him train the hard way, make him use everything available to him to win battles may it be wires, knives, robotics, sniper rifles. Results: an actual star wars character that is fun to read, doesnt come off as obscenely op as his wins come from hard work and the use of his brain and you dont have to add systems that only serve to ruin novel immersion.A smart weak character struggling to survive is more interesting to read than your regular trashy webnovel mc who builds an unrealistic harem made up of idiots.

This novel suffers from the webnovel syndrome, it starts off good but immediately from the first few chapters you notice something is wrong, it all starts with how the mc cant keep his shit together when women are around, you motice that human interactions are a bit screwd and plthe points where the main character should shine with intelligence are simply moments where he pulls some knowledge out of his ass and everyone is fine with it. Then it quickly falls down a hill so fast it could be a bullet, everything becomes borderlime outragious and clichè, from sqving damsel in distress to being always in peril and getting ganged up by bullies, everybody is shocked by his genius and in the end even if people notice something is wrong everything is still fine. Then you have bullshit things that seem useless to everyone except the mc who conveniently makes him gain extra power from the magic hat, your usual sould dissonance thing, the either lone wolf trauma or the overused edgy trauma, and a tragic backstory for the cherry on top.The relationships with females are weird.

mybopinion of this novel is mixed: the worldbuilding is good, i enjoy this type of fantasy worlds and everything is explained pretty well.human intwractions however... holy fuck they are bad: the conversations feel clunky and... inhuman for a lack of better term, the unner thoughts are extremely cringy and once again do not reflect the reality of how people think, they feel clunky and weird. Every single time people speak with eachother, it leaves a weird taste in your mouth, as if something was inherently wrong, and thats because they are. The interactions are way too symplistic and counterfeited so that everything goes as the MC wants, the personality of the characters becomes robotic as if everything has to go as the Mc wants or remembers, people feel way too static and unmoving, they do not rrally have thoughts of their own, the umpression that it gives is that they come briefly online when the mc is there.The interactions with the FL are so clichè and cringy it feels like the author never met someone in his life, nobody asks 30 times "why do you care about me" and nobody stutters every single phrase if they do not have a speech impairment.If people in real life acted as the mc of this novel they would have been dead the first few chapters.

the author wrote it may be a harem, so if this is not for you like it is not for me a fair warning your eyes may bleed from forced plot, pokemon catching, and subhuman interactions

chapter 1 it explains that this guy is basically a master in everything and won the tournament jsut because he can do everything and others can't match him. I believe it would have been more interesting a guy that beats people with strategy, outsmarting his opponents with means everybody can get. What i want to say is that it is boring to read a character that has the best magical sword and best magical armor in the world and wins because of it, it would be more interesting to read a guy with a high end but common armor and sword that wins because he us able to outplay or outsmart his opponents. In this fic it seems like the mc wins because he is constantly above the power curve, not because he is more skilled.