Good plot. The world is drawn nicely. There's potential. That's why I'm giving it a 5. But I hope there will be fewer minor errors. Also, please increase the number of chapters to at least 4 per day.
Fantasy · Gebelin
Thanks for the help.
ch 17 Chapter 17: Introduction to breathing techniques
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Good plot. The world is drawn nicely. There's potential. That's why I'm giving it a 5. But I hope there will be fewer minor errors. Also, please increase the number of chapters to at least 4 per day.
The most powerful magician and his life simulation system
Fantasy · Gebelin