Webnovel Author: Yetano - Fanfic&Novel Collection

Unfortunately, the few early chapters will set him up as having the capabilities of being able to learn both Magic and Swordsmanship, and so until the moment for when he meets a Mentor that is proficient in Archeries and the time he'll spend with that person comes, I hope that you bare with it. But yes, the MC will prioritize Long Distance Arts of Bows over Magic, Close Range Arts of Martial Arts (possibly named as Techniques in the Six-faced world) over Swordsmanship. And while he is capable on all-fronts, they're not without their own downsides, so expect events of causalities.

I'm still having a hard time regarding the placement of grammars and verbs that isn't fit on some sentences. By the way, the setting will have some lowkey Sci-fi elements and Contemporaries, a.k.a Near-Future Isekai so no Space-Travelling or the likes... Yet. I'm having some ideas as to have the other Continents and Realms in the world to have distinct mythologies, like a Mediterranean or Middle-Eastern vibe to one of the found continents of Altaris. That's that, and i appreciate for the kind words!

Ah, pardon. By that it's about the possibilities IF Mangaka or Drawers decides to pick their 'Pen' and make some artwork inspired by these in general and with the settings and atmosphere you're having Just in the Prologue, it might make for a Bloodborne-esque vibe novel, and i'm All down for it.

It's the prologue and things are quite intense already. I don't really get what's things supposed to be or what action is partaking on some scene, like my brain got lost when people speedrun about their life's accomplishes. If the world's that red colored, i wonder what it'd look like if someone decided to pick their pen? Characters background's a little too much ambiguous, but there's room for having some spill out a little far down the line so if written comprehensively, it might make them more believable.

Would be more appreciated if there were to be some criticism or certain topic you'd pick like style of writing, story-pacing or settings but i'll take your compliments for it.

Thanks for describing my shortcomings with your honesty. I'll be sure to learn for the upcoming chapters and when i were to revise Volume in the near future.