Thank you for your reply. I understand the problem you have with the characters. In the future I'll definitely make them a bit more realistic. I'll also change the way I write to see if you like it better. About the dots you've written about in your comments, I'll remove them. Please continue writing these comments. You would help me a lot.
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Thank you for your reply. I understand the problem you have with the characters. In the future I'll definitely make them a bit more realistic. I'll also change the way I write to see if you like it better. About the dots you've written about in your comments, I'll remove them. Please continue writing these comments. You would help me a lot.
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