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Then her eyes laid on her flat tummy. Or is it because of that?
Urban · PerkyPompous_Pixie
Its a really well written book and has a lot of potential! The emotions, characters are all well written! Except the few typos and grammar errors, this book was a wonderful read for me
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This novel is really well written! Good job author~ I added it to my collection! It has an interesting premise and is an easy read. I wish I could read all the chapters, but sadly I have to wait. I will be cheering you on!
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he...called her hun
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Realistic · Moonwriting
use single quotes since double is for dialogue
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Realistic · Moonwriting
I want this sksksksks
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Realistic · Moonwriting
crouched? crochet = knit
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Realistic · Moonwriting
Wha- she's a ghost?
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Realistic · Moonwriting
wanted*
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Realistic · Moonwriting
That's quite rare, considering they're mafia
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Realistic · Moonwriting
Wooo Master
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Realistic · Moonwriting
An hour later, someone entered the study. I did not need to lift my head to know who they were.
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Realistic · Moonwriting
entered* typo I think
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Realistic · Moonwriting
Um sir, can you throw those cufflinks in the direction of this trash can. I can sell- I mean recycle them
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Realistic · Moonwriting
I just finished reading the first season, it's a very good novel. I did not find any grammar flaws. Almost all areas of this work are excellent. Will definitely recommend this book. It has a unique plot, which as a writer I love. The author did a very good job. The only thing I found a little uncomfortable during reading was that, the author does a lot of telling instead of showing. Other than that this novel is really good.
I Awakened As A Writer!
Fantasy · CetusWritings