A Magical Journey, it has come to full loop since I read this title. Thank you for raking me and many other readers through this odyssey. I have loved, laughed, and at times disappointed, but when I finally reach the end, I cant help but feels joy with the growth of Quinn and the characters, you the author, and me as a reader. You've done a fantastic work, be proud and keep doing what you feels best for you.
Carburettor? Really? This is one of the most baffling naming sense I ever encountered. How the other character's names were just fine, and you messed up MC's as inevitably the one to be mentioned the most is a wonder to me. On a side note, the idea is pretty interesting and novel for me. The logic and background of the world you tried to imply was well presented. Though I just got through 60s chapters, the characters development was already taking shape and pretty decent. The story was pretty well paced. The only thing irks me was, again, the MC's name, and you have to write it in its full despicable form every time it was mentioned.
such a cursed wish... How beautiful!
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Mito's line kinda applied to you here man. Any last word?
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Thanks man, may you have the good things coming amidst the busy day.
Dude, Rengoku is the family name, why would you put the big brother's name before Senjuro?
Any serious and committed author hardly would consider to pursue fanfiction as their creative pot, thus the existence of trashy fanfictions. They would rather do an original, copyrights and revenue as one of the reason and more challenge for their craft as the other.
I dont know what to feel of Hiroto's character. Too chinese-y? Way too hot-headed and cant see the bigger picture on his goals (if he has any), he always feels insulted at a simple or slight remark, like those CN's young master.
But many authors put hiatus of their original work on RoyalRoad and preferred to release them on webnovel. I havent check the fanfic one, but i'll try it out
Some of the reviews didn't do justice to this fic. Sure, at the start MC did frustratingly inconsistent, but the development, pacing, and dialogue between the characters overall are pretty well-thought out. The only big downside is just the updates, though the writer made a fair trade with longer chapter. Keep going man
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