High_Agility - Profile

Amazing storytelling, attention to details is impeccable as well, but i do hope the author could pace the character's dialogues a bit to make it sound more natural. the rest of the writing is good as always...keep up the great work, hoping to read quality scifi from you

I quite enjoy the story so far, especially with the way the system is portrayed - it's not OP but it does work aas a plot armor, i mean read chapter 4 you get it...but the rest is good...i enjoy comparing the before and after stats change, it feels like the mc is growing...and the military radio call was done very good...does the author actually do radio calls? why is there no mech? i know there's like a power suit, but no mech yet? please include it would be interesting to see a mech fight...