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Thanks for the chapter. But I'm surprised that no one commented on the name of the Captain of the Ninja Forces, Kaka Shi. That made me laugh so much!! :D If he has a Sharingan or even just red eyes or one red eye then that would be cool. Maybe Damien will ask him if he has a Sharingan once he hears the name!! :D

Gauntlets may be the best choice for him or maybe a mace like Kaido. Also, it's a shorter chapter than usual, around 800 words less. But anyways, thanks for the chapter.

How come he didn't take the Deprive-Deprive fruit from Dorobo's corpse? I mean he just extracted the Deprivation ability with the token and not the fruit itself. It would be useful just to keep it with him so that another person will not get it, like he got the Mind-Mind fruit. It's still a powerful fruit.

Feels like he is getting weaker even though he recovered. I understand that his demigod abilities got a bit weaker, but his magic and combat strength should not have diminished. I mean he beat Luke when he first met him just using hand-to-hand, and now, he is struggling against Ghosts as a son of Hades, oh the irony :D. Thanks for the chapter though.

Yeah it did seem like that, but hopefully he will recover soon. And even though the NERF was justified, 150 seems too little when they are on the way to camp with all those monsters chasing them. Maybe in a few days, after he recovers fully, he can increase it to 250 so that they have a decent chance. And don't let him explain his abilities, it will be used against him, especially by Luke, if it goes according to canon. Also will he have a final hard limit to the shadows in the future, or will it be like Jin Woo and be unlimited. Are you also planning to give him a black heart, even though it may be OP?

Wow. Guess having more brain power still makes you an idiot. I mean he literally chose a Dramatic Entrance and he thinks how come this is more troublesome and that he wanted a fun adventure and how he ended up in this mess. Seriously, he should know that a dramatic entrance, where it said something similar to a pillar of light will announce his entrance and location, would be troublesome to handle. And he chose Airbending?? Seriously?? Dude you are in the middle of the Fire Nation capital, inside the palace of the Fire Lord, with no food, water, money, map, resources, no way to escape, no idea of the strength of the people there, and he chose Airbending for the first bending. It would have been better to even choose to wait for at least a day or 2 and not learn any bending for the time being till he got the layout and resources I mentioned. He would be safer that way as a non-bender won't be seen as too much of a threat. I really don't know where all that intelligence and brain power he chose went to. I know he is excited about bending and powers and all, but he really should be a little more calm and logical in his actions and decisions in a new world.

Maybe you could have recovered it if you pressed Undo or Ctrl+Z. Either way, thanks for the chapter. :)

For Satan class, you could use Transcendental class instead.

Thanks for the chapter. BTW do you have a P At reon account?

Please update soon. This is one of the best Pokemon fanfics.

Are you not gonna update this?

Please continue this. This is a really good novel.

Where do we vote for them? Is there a poll for this? Also thanks for the chapter. Amazing as always.

Yes she is a clown, but sometimes the clown is too irritating. So it's better to not have SG framed. Either way, Iris will still be irritating, but with this she will be a bit less irritating.

Thanks for the chapter. Great story so far. BTW do you have a Pat reon account for this story?

Thanks for the chapter. BTW do you have a Pa treon account for this story?

This chapter is very confusing. First, you say he has a ship made of Adam Wood and is using it but then you say he is using a submarine. Also the events in Fishman Island are totally wrong. The assassination happens a bit after the Celestial Dragon (CD) comes there. After the CD comes there, Otohime saves him and goes with him to get a petition for Fishmen to live above ground. And later, like at least a week or so, when they are getting the signatures for it, that's when Hody kills her. Also there is another confusing sentence in the chapter, where you say Ryga saw Hody in the Cafe and knocked out Hody and his goons with Conqueror's Haki but then you say Hody is going to kill Otohime. Please try to edit this chapter to make more sense.

He should interfere. He's already made a lot of changes to canon, it's basically almost out the window. It's better to not risk it, since due to the changes made, there may be a different victim, like Daphne or one of his friends who are petrified, or by bad luck someone dies due to seeing the Basilisk's eyes directly. He would feel so bad when that happens. Also most of the petrified victims lost almost a whole year of time. This should be prevented since he likes healing others so much, so he should not allow them to be petrified at all.

Thanks for the chapter. Try to add some flexibility of Water Style from ATLA to the Taijutsu style if possible, maybe some elements of Earth and Air too. Just using Fire Style from ATLA may leave some openings. Also let him try to make him see if using Lightning as it's used in ATLA is possible. No need for hand signs and it would be fast, kinda like using Byakurai from Bleach. Same with the Ninjutsu attacks for the other elements. There are also many anime references he can use for all the elements and Genjutsu and Fuiinjutsu.