Webnovel Author: MidWinterSnow - Fanfic Collection

Thanks for the review :) As I always said, I am a new writer and any kind of criticism helps! However, I would like to address and elaborate on a small portion of your review. 'The Canon' You see, I have the overall structure of the story planned in my head, including but not limited to the starting, the overall progression, and the ending. And I make up the finer details as I go on. But please note that it was always my intention to add the canon. I won't spoil how things will go from here on. And If I cut short the first 20-ish chapters, a lot of plot holes would been created as a result, thus affecting the world-building. But, yes, I would have loved to keep it short if possible, but blame that on the lack of my skills. But I am improving as I write, so don't worry, the story will get better as chapters go by (Or so I hope) Personally, I am MILES away from creating a mind-boggling story like Cuttlefish-sensei, but I would love to pleasantly surprise you guys with a well-thought-out and well-written plot. Again, Thank you for your review.

The first thing I would like to say - Give me your typing skills!!! Man, I can't really type beyond a chapter or two in a day and you posted 40 chapters in 9 days?! You kidding me?! Anyways, coming to the book itself- It's great! The idea, the vision; everything comes together really well. That being said, the only thing I would suggest is to get a grammatical editing tool like Grammarly. Since you translate from Brazilian Portuguese, the translator can botch up sometimes. But all in all, it's a pretty solid book. If you guys are hesitating, don't. This is a novel with real thought behind it. The author has improved tremendously in the latest chapter, so it will be an enjoyable experience. Good luck :)

I apologize for the boring experience you had. Plotholes are something I strongly dislike, especially when they are noticeable to me. In an effort to address this, I have attempted to create a unique world that seamlessly combines elements from three different worlds. The initial chapters focused primarily on establishing the setting, which I understand may not have been as engaging. However, I want to assure you that the story WILL incorporate established canon, which has already begun in my exclusive Patreon chapters. I apologize for the prolonged buildup, but I appreciate your patience in reading and providing a review. I kindly request that you continue to read a few more chapters and see if I can change your perspective. Thank you for the review, It helps.