Webnovel Author: BlackShadow66 - Novel Collection

your novel is good is just that, in your 1-14 chapter is just that your writing is a little hard to understand. I know that your new. [img=recommend] but in 15 and above, the story became a little good, not like the 1st chapters. the story has become more interesting and entertaining. btw. I need more[img=update][img=update][img=update]

I'll just give it 4 stars cause it's kinda good but I cant wait for the MC to become op even though your still new at least it's readable so it's still considered good