JJ_Hood

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JJ_Hood
2 months ago
Commented

he said he fixed this....why is it not fixed!

Rivers signaled, and two burly men in dark suits emerged from the shadows. "Haul him off. Make sure every corner of London hears this: even with the young master away, the Selwyn family's rules stand firm. We've let things slide too long—these lowlifes forgot who's running the show. In two hours, the whole city's buzzing about Selwyn dominance. As for that pub scum? Wipe 'em out. No survivors."

Hogwarts: The Mafia Lord of Slytherin

Hogwarts: The Mafia Lord of Slytherin

Book&Literature · MrGrim_

JJ_Hood
JJ_Hood
2 months ago
Commented

True enough...I really like this story but it throws me off when I have to decipher which name is correct.

"Specifically," she continued, "the Solent align with the Theresas, the Conrads with the Alvas, the Simpsons with the Demoses, and the Stewards with your own— the Cavendish line, now the Selwyn family."

Hogwarts: The Mafia Lord of Slytherin

Hogwarts: The Mafia Lord of Slytherin

Book&Literature · MrGrim_

JJ_Hood
JJ_Hood
10 months ago
Posted

I like this story, but unless you fix the technical issues, I won't be reading anymore. The chapters are not published chronologically, which makes the story jump around and hard to follow. Some chapters even jump around within the same chapter. Plus, the same chapter is published multiple times.

JJ_Hood
JJ_Hood
3 years ago
Replied to Ryofu

I'm definitely including romance...as to the romantic partner or partners...I have yet to decide. Any suggestions?