Webnovel Author: Kont_Archimedes - Fanfic Collection

Would things have changed if I had read all the free chapters, that is, 19 chapters, instead of 16? LoL

You really have problems as a writer. I read all the chapters that are free to read, not the 16 chapters, and you couldn't convince me to continue reading it! I don't have to do any good to you and keep reading the paid chapters just because maybe this garbage MC will get better, no one is! First, learn that this is a business and plan accordingly. In the free chapters you don't give the slightest hint of his evil side. Then you claim that I will get better results if you read more and pay??? You should have at least written a warning somewhere, my friend. Oh you are so newbie. Anyway, as I mentioned in the review, I said he wasn't evil as a demon king, he was just an anti-hero with his own sense of morality. I don't know if it will change in the future, it was not clear from what I read. Frankly, you didn't give much reason for it to change in the future. Maybe you should increase the number of free chapters or put a warning that he's a slow-developing villain. Either way, I'm still sure he's not evil.

Can you remove the "villain" tag from your novel ? Otherwise, you will be heavily insulted by those who come to read the novel because of this tag, like me. I'm just warning you. Don't add meaningless tags to the novel for more readers. And yes, for those who will read this, do not read this novel just for this tag! MC is an anti-hero style hero who, although he is a demon lord belonging to the evil faction, expresses his discomfort with their 'evil' actions at every opportunity, and although he is not a saint, he has his own sense of morality. This is not a novel where you will witness a real demon lord and his relentless evil. Don't waste your time.

Stop being a writer and become a comedian. Although you suck at that too... This book isn't worth reading. The main character is spineless. His family is very powerful so he doesn't really have any motivation or purpose to become stronger. And the author is not smart enough to give that purpose. Maybe he'll give him a perverted purpose. Like HAREM? It's a disgraceful story, especially as a comedy.

This novel is completely mediocre. I respect the idea of ​​writing your own novel inspired by another novel, but this is literally plagiarism!! Everything, down to the dialogues, has been stolen from similar versions of the genre. The plot, the characters, the dialogues, everything... I'm surprised you have the face to shamelessly upload this here.

Another novel in which a powerful 'general' who has lived for years acts like a whiny retardd child after being reincarnated. Author if you're going to write a main character acting like an dumpp, don't give him a background story like this