Webnovel Author: Allen_Danels - Fanfic Collection

For me it would be Reverse Flash who got annoyed by his brother so he went back in time and made sure he was not conceived. Now, he has ne brother and only he knows!

What I am saying is this, he should have gone for people with more authority first, not Midoriya's mother. I mean, sure, he will be close to him due to her but if you had strategized and thought higher, the MC would be receiving the power himself.

So, let me get this straight. He has the power to seduce any woman and the first he goes after is Midoriya's mother? I mean, he could have aimed higher like a politician, a member of the Hero Association or even the PM's wife or daughter that way he could meet All Might much more easier but instead he goes and rapes a weak willed woman? Now this is an example of low brain power to the author's side.

I can't believe I waited for a whole day just for a cliffhanger!

Okay, I wasn't trying to be mean or anything; it's just that the way you were writing, jumping from one perspective to another while you could focus on eleven and twelve, show us more about them instead of feeding us crumbs, I mean there is even two chapters where the two were not in them. I'm just saying, I chose to read the book because twelve was in it. If you were just going to let him be a side character to a book related to him then I find it not worth my time.

This is getting tedious and very much drawn out. If I wanted to know the plot of the series I would have rewatched it.

So the whole theme of this book is cross-dressing? Imma pass on that

I wish I could say some colourful words because of the word count

Have you ever been so excited for a chapter then the author does something stupid and you just wanna beat him up

Rhaegor: I chose genocide Everyone:

this chapter made me puke. I guess it is in the trash bin for me

Please, reduce the 'met a beautiful girl by accident's cliche moments. Build up your story so that you won't be categorized in the same level as most harem fanfic authors. That's why people get tired and irritated of them, like I am starting to be.

I hate these kinds of novels. The author let's the mc train for a short time then they take them out of there only to end up running into a situation that will make him grow even more stronger than he was training or fall for a devil fruit! Yeah, dropped

Wow, this is the most frustrating and boring into ever

Dude, your story is amazing and probably the only book in my library that makes me spend bundles just to see if there's an update. Keep writing this amazing story and don't let anyone tell you how to write it.