Niffy_K8 - Profile

ur story is interesting but when you wrote dis story u only focused on the main character love story u didn't really write about the other character lot story like amiya and bernado. u left us in suspense not knowing what will have to them next. when u write you don't only think as a writer but also has a reader. even when you are worried about the length of d book try ur best and incorporate other character love story there except if u are writing another story entirely about them then u tell us d title of d book. overall ur book is still interesting but when next u are writing think as a reader and not only as a writer 😉😉

I started reading this story from 2020. I don't usually like long story at all cuz done it will get to a point that it will be boring. I started reading ur story from light reader but I couldn't wait for the update anymore so I joined webnovel bcoz of this story. truth to be told ave Never seen anybodies talent as good as urs. I love d fact dat ur story started with a completely normal human story. seriously no one would have guessed that it was a fantasy story then u put this kind of twist that extremely blowed my mind. seriously during the time of reading this story i cried. u story was just too mind blowing I also love the fact that u included the other characters that needs to find love . if not for ur story trust me I would not come to webnovel. so webnovel make sure you pay are very well or else.... keep it up kazzen don't let that fire on u goes down kisses