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ch 28 Terror
Fantasy 路 Drino
Writing quality 5 - i like the writing styleStory development 5 - story is looking goodCharacter design 6 if possible 馃樁鈥嶐煂笍Updating stability 3 needs improvementWorld background 4Overall, i love it. a good read.
Thank you very much for sharing your opinion, this is my very first novel, and I am learning more because of you people and your advices.
Fantasy 路 somerandomnoone
Thank you very much for sharing your opinion, I am learning more because of you people and your advices.
thankyou very much for your opinion, i'll work on my pov more carefully.
Sorry for the late reply, I am currently working on the chapters so please stay tuned because there will be a whole lot of interesting plots and stories to enjoy!
ch 0 1 The First Myth
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Oooh I feel like this vampire will end up being another subordinate.[img=coins]
ch 28 Terror
DEATH GOD HADES
Fantasy 路 Drino