Webnovel Author: lohse_ - Novel Collection

lohse_

1yr

Commented

"You have such a lovely and handsome man but how comes you don't love him!" said Heaven moving around Justin

Inside the life of a billionaire teen

Teen · ZoeTinnah

lohse_

1yr

Commented

This is about Heaven? She used to be quiet?

She was the kind of girl who never spoke to someone first and always minded her own business. It was really shocking that she had spoke to him first.

Inside the life of a billionaire teen

Teen · ZoeTinnah

lohse_

1yr

Posted

Very dramatic and fast paced. I think a lot of people will really like it. There are issues with needing editing and places that are confusing, so be aware. However, if you love teen drama, you will probably love this book regardless!

Inside the life of a billionaire teen

Teen · ZoeTinnah

lohse_

1yr

Commented

Funny Mirror calling out Heaven for being dramatic. Aren't they both? or all, really.😆

ch 0 8 The drama Queen.

Inside the life of a billionaire teen

Teen · ZoeTinnah

lohse_

1yr

Commented

Hard to have any sympathy for her. Drama queen indeed 😅

"How can you push an innocent girl like me, I really didn't mean to step on your shoes, I have apologized many times but you didn't want to listen to me , i told you am sorry but you pushed me on the floor , look I have even sprained my ankle ( touching on her ankle with one hand),you heartless thug bullying a weak person." said Heaven as she cried out loud and fake tears attracting everyone's attention.

Inside the life of a billionaire teen

Teen · ZoeTinnah

lohse_

1yr

Commented

Mirror is so harsh. Could have said no and had all the drama at the wedding. 😅 Does Heaven just not like Hazel? That's why she is nicer to others?

ch 0 7 Back to school.

Inside the life of a billionaire teen

Teen · ZoeTinnah

lohse_

1yr

Commented

empty classroom?

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Inside the life of a billionaire teen

Teen · ZoeTinnah

lohse_

1yr

Commented

This chapter and the last have a good flow 😊 Good work

ch 0 6 A new Heaven Woods .

Inside the life of a billionaire teen

Teen · ZoeTinnah

lohse_

1yr

Commented

Did she wake up on the wrong side of the bed? 😅

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Inside the life of a billionaire teen

Teen · ZoeTinnah

lohse_

1yr

Commented

We must all be from very different places in this comment section. If I was Mirror, I would've never agreed to such a thing as forced marriage. Running away would've been better than being part of a business deal. She has every right to be angry, and she should've fought against it harder.

ch 0 5 I do.

Inside the life of a billionaire teen

Teen · ZoeTinnah

lohse_

1yr

Commented

terrible father. Poor Mirror

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Inside the life of a billionaire teen

Teen · ZoeTinnah

lohse_

1yr

Commented

The plot is interesting, but sometimes, it's confusing to read and easy to get lost. with so much happening, I want more of each event to really understand the character

ch 0 4 The order.

Inside the life of a billionaire teen

Teen · ZoeTinnah

lohse_

1yr

Commented

moving dead jerk. known a few of those 😉

"Mom... please beg him for me, I don't want to get married to that moving dead jerk, please mom do it for the sake of your daughter please." cries Mirror