This will be an indepth review from me so stop if you don't want spoilers for first 15 chapters or so. ...... The world - It's interesting with the abyss and layers and I hope to see the author explore it more as more times goes on in the story. Maybe even come up with unique climatic conditions etc. Grammer - Decent enough but with all I've read, it's a major inprovement. I didn't come to WN expecting perfect grammar and I didn't get it for most part. That being said, this is passable enough for me to not give up just from the grammer alone. It's rather fluid. Characters - They're interesting but many of them were introduced and were saved for later. who knows when that later might come or whether they'll be explored again or not. (I hope they do since the author takes notes to include them in their other story and the side-story is interesting ) That being said, there is a little issue with the pacing being all over the place for me but nothing major. I like this story and would recommend you to check out the first few chapters to see if it's your cup of tea.
The author here. There are various things I want to say so I hope you'll listen. The story will be slow and will take its time establishing itself so I hope you'll join the MC on his journey with an open mind. It'll take time for the MC to grow up and become OP and gather his harem so stay tuned. I don't want to force things and focus on world-building a little bit more before getting to good stuff. The updated might also be inconsistent since I'm quote busy outside writing so I hope you all will support me by giving me feedback.
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original Dual Ascension of the Blind Legend
His parents were regressors in a game and he was born in the digital world. As a result, a lot of complications arose during his growth. He even lost his sight as a result and was left abandoned in a pleasure house to grow up. And he was happy to have a new name and new life with the pleasure ladies. Till one day the gods of the world interfered and revealed a secret to him - the whole world was nothing more than an estimation being run by a different planet's government. It was all in preparation for launching a new virtual gaming environment - ascension. It threatened to take his happiness away but the gods gave him a choice - either help them get rid of the threat the game possesses, or watch everything he had perish into the flames. And so began a cycle of ascension and power laundering by a blind child that would go on to become a legend inside the virtual world. However, the game has more than it shows and the only way to ensure everyone's safety for Shiryuu is for him to play the game as well. It's a game that will decide the fate of the world. And the first step to ensure things do not go out of control? Weed out the bad seed with the help of his new sponser. What will he make of his new life?4 Chs 24 Collections
I've read a lot of cliche stories on this one but this one looks really unique to me. Mainly because the FL is interesting and so are the side characters.
I will not die a Villainess's death
Fantasy · Holy_mackrel