Webnovel Author: Enjoyed - Fanfic Collection

This is my personal review of my story. The writing quality to ok at best. I am new to this so I expected it to be this bad. There aren't many typos but the wiring structure is terrible. The story development so far is bad, but that is to be expected because it is the early arcs of Tensura. It will 100% at least get a bit better in later arcs when I go into the wn. Character design is basically the same as Tensura, just Munuru is added. Munuru is unnecessarily op, much more than the op of Tensura. Updating stability is bad, I take very long breaks when I do and at this moment if chapter 19 I am sick so It will be varied. World background right now is bad, but in future chapters it will be revealed why I put it at 4 stars. You can decide to read this if you want but don't expect much. I will be doing a remake of this, just without the unnecessary opness. There will also be sequels with better overall reviews.

Forgot to add this but this story is basically just the base for future stories, so it is meant to be quite bland with an overly overpowered mc

That's what I am going to do! Thanks for the review and I totally agree. I personally like op MCs especially since it fits with tensura but I went quite overboard. I think I have stated before that I am going to rewrite the story without [Gods will]. You can leave if you want or wait until the remake when I will 1. be a better writer 2. characters will have more expression 3. The MC will fit the scaling of Tensura.

Understandable. The story is very bland, even now. She will travel to stronger worlds and eventually a custom made world, so hopefully the story will get less bland. There are going to be multiple sequels with better quality after a while. Thank you for trying to read the story

I actually agree with this. it's quite boring early on. I tried to change it later on though with the differences varying.