one of the many things influencing this story :p
Gifted with might and magic beyond all, the Heroes rallied the people of Nemesis. Blood feuds were forgiven, bickering politicians made peace, and rivalling counts joined under their banner. Together, they pushed back the tides of darkness, fighting evil all the way to its core in the Heart of Darkness.
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Yes its not common for firearms to pop up in this genre. Glad you find it interesting rather than weird. I feel like in history the early firearm warfare is often eclipsed by the Medieval era warfare and the Napoleonic warfare era. There's actually so many interesting developments going on there that people just don't know. I'm excited to bring that into my worldbuilding. That, and because my worldbuilding is heavily inspired by Warhammer Fantasy. And they had guns. So much guns. Also, good attention to detail there with the arquebus still being experimental. Glad my worldbuilding worked in the dialogue XD
Further picking revealed equally unorthodox weapons, from an axe with a strange, gilded head to a dagger with an ornate handle. There was even an arquebus, a strange, stubby weapon that spewed fire and metal. The weapons here ranged from expensive to experimental. They weren't the kind of weapons a petty lord would be generous enough to arm an army with.
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I'm conflicted about answering this question because the revelation will be a very important to the plot : D
ch 14 The Night Before the Battle
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Owah thanks a bunch! For sure he will, but what's so great about warmth if its not earned? ;>
ch 0 8 The Spearless Man
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I actually have that worry nagging me as well, believe it or not. I don't want no build up, but I can go too far and drag on too long. I wonder if people will think that here... In any case, that will be fixed soon. Very soon! You'll really like the next chapters incoming chapters, and I'm working hard to publish everyday! ;>
ch 13 The Shepeste Militia
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Darth Plagueis level of wise of course
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Can't have a grimdark story without infighting among humans :D
Corvus scratched his nose. "I used to think that with the world saved, there wouldn't be a lot of quarrelling between men to make my job worthwhile. But surprise, they're got back to warring with each other the moment our common enemy left us.
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gotta have those light moments. It won't feel dark when its always dark :>
Jobb laughed heartily, and Rose grinned. For a second, the tavern felt warmer for him. There was something comforting in the way his daughter's freckled nose wrinkled as she held back a laugh.
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not as strong as the power of love
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Thank you! I'm super glad that's your first impression of him :D
ch 0 8 The Spearless Man
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Haha yeah, well done! His name just sounded right for a dark lord, so I just need to have something similar.
ch 0 1 Prologue: The Age of Heroes
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Raymond calling out Trosk's drip when he's almost naked smh
The half rusted bulky door at the end of the passage creaked upward when he stood before it, spewing out a blinding peal of golden light that traced noticeably hot on his completely bare body, save for his faded crimson trunks.
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Really fast-feeling first chapter. Pretty straightforward premise and without some heavy worldbuilding bogging it down. The writing feels like Raymond; just going straight towards the action. Nice prose too that really captures the world the character's in. Can't wait to see how you'll write the action, since I'm sure that's the bread and butter of this whole story.
ch 0 1 Blood of Terra, Fight!
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very interesting! I didn't imagine the red mage thing would send that kind of message. I will see what I can do about this new info 馃榾
Kill Every Bastard That Summoned Me Into This Grimdark World
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