Hello guys, here WaloWilly, I introduce myself. I am a new aspiring writer and just calling me that makes me a little uncomfortable, so any comments you make can be done gently, please. I let them see
2022-05-07 Joined Global
Danmachi
I'm not one to leave reviews, but hey, if it's the author's request, I should at least try. The plot is going well in general, I like the interaction of the characters, they seem faithful to their personality without seeming forced but I want more of the high school, it is where there is the most drama and also if possible some chapter from the point of view of another character I think that would be all on my part except for the obvious that it is a great fanfic and that honestly it should be higher in the ranking. Greetings ;)
ch 51 Chapter 51
TV · Maximus_Quill
Naruko forever!!
Option 2
ch 57 Announcement 2 -
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
Wing como interés amoroso? Yo pensé que talvez felicia o Jean. Para un buen drama de escuela diría que metas a liz Allen como hicieron en el espectacular hombre araña El desarrollo sigue siendo bueno, me hubiera gustado ver un poco la interacción de Colleen y Peter mientras entrenaban pero aún un muy buen capitulo espero el siguiente
ch 0 9 First Rule of FIGHT CLUB
Anime & Comics · Othniel_Seth
Is there a page to read the chapters in advance?
ch 63 [Event] [Activity Clubs] [9] Layla Adriana Tarmias
Fantasy · NihilRuler
first of all, great chapter, I like the different points of view of people. second, can we see an episode that totally focuses on hector as a normal high school boy and his interaction with his peers? please 🥺🥺 third good job take a power stone, I'm looking forward to the next chapter
ch 51 X-People
Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
Frank or harry
Thanks for the chapter, pls more chapters
ch 259 Chapter 257: Irresponsible Teacher (18+)
Anime & Comics · Raizeenn
Me gusta le da al mundo un poco de realismo y abre una amplia gama de situaciones y emociones que pueden tener sus mujeres aparte de un cambio de ritmo en tus fics habituales. Sería interesante ver cómo se desarrollaría esta situación en tus otros fics como my stepsister
ch 66 Isao's peaceful day
Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City
Anime & Comics · akikan40