Webnovel Author: Apolonius556 - Fanfic Collection

Why the hell do you post 20 chapters and then demand that if they want to read more they have to pay on patreon? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Pure spam about another page for you to pay to be able to read. Nefarious..................................................................................................................................................................................

Absolutely nefarious here abandoned this story First of all the Mc is absolutely bland, in the second chapter with 3 YEARS he measures 2 meters and can already transform into his lycan form. Then he barely has a chance he goes with the Starks to follow him by "helping them" by giving him a bite. All this described in the most forced and rapid way as wanting to get it out of the way. Third he says he doesn't owe the Starks anything and then he goes and kisses their ass like a brothel whore. Honestly, this story is disappointing.

The story promises a lot at the beginning but as the chapters go by it becomes slow and boring, the domestic MC to a dragon for nothing because the few appearances he has with the dragon are few and absurd. The relationship with the characters is incredibly bland and I don't feel like the MC is important in the story other than winning some tournaments and being "a good gentleman". Without further ado, I was disappointed. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Thank you very much, the best thing I can recommend is that you can use the google translator, with the option from Spanish to English. I hope it helps you.

Hello! Thanks for commenting, you see, what happens is that English is not my mother tongue, so I wouldn't know how to write the chapters well so that they look as good as possible. I always try that my works have the best possible quality. I do not rule out that it could happen in the future. But with this story it won't happen for now. I tried to do another story in English but like I said, I don't know how it turned out. Sorry for not being able to help you.

Hey, thank you very much for the comment, everything helps to keep improving, I'm glad you're liking the story.

Here the author making a self-criticism, I hope you like this story, as you can see it will be about romance and conflict that 2 extremely interesting people have to face. Damon Salvatore from The Vampire Diaries and Kate Denali from Twilight. The story will have short chapters, but there will be many, so I hope you like it. Any feedback is appreciated so that we can continue to improve. PS: Sorry if there are any typos or spelling errors, English is not my first language.

Well a review here, The MC is really tiring, the events in the story happen very fast, without giving context to what is happening. Things happen around the MC and he doesn't seem to care. The writing quality is understandable but not acceptable, as far as I'm concerned if you used an editor and proofreader it would be better. The characters around the MC are basic and without much consideration when it comes to developing in the story. I had faith in the story at the beginning but at one point they added things that didn't make sense and characters started appearing out of nowhere without context, as I said before. And finally, the powers of the MC, they paint it as OP at first and then it's not what happens. The truth a disappointment.

Well here is a review, quite acceptable writing quality, development of the story a bit rushed to my liking in terms of the MC's powers, but if you like OP characters it's quite good, the character design is not bad, but it seems a bit illogical and absurd to me that a baby no more than 2 or 3 years old has so much power, but hey, that's what the author wanted to say.

Hello! Thanks for commenting, the character's couple will be only 1, so it will be monogamous.

Bueno, aqui el autor auto votandose, espero que les guste mi historia, como veran es un FANFIC de Harry Potter. Esta centrado en Dimitri Orion Black, ultimo heredero de la antigua y noble casa de los Black. Disfruten, cualquier comentario es bienvenido para mejorar :D