so the chapter was good I would live for it to be a little long in the chapters in the future please make the fight scenes longer and more detailed more sword play as well he is a master martial artist emphasize that. The overall writing was no good no grammatical mistakes. I just hope for longer chapters with better fight scenes 5 stars
ch 0 3 Khalasar fight
Book&Literature · DaoistqZxYMH
love it just please do 2 chapters a day I will suppo
ch 0 1 Rebirth
Anime & Comics · IDB
hi I really love this fiction just continue to update daily and be consistent please this has the potential to be one of the best one piece fics
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hi live the first chapter please make it in the mcu universe
ch 0 2 Chapter 1
Movies · Ash_D_Born
I really appreciate the comments it helps to further your reading experience if there is anything you see that is wrong or of you want me to add an element to the fic please send me a message
ch 0 9 Chapter 9: Blur
Anime & Comics · celestialshadows1
thank you very much for sticking with me and supporting this fic
ch 0 9 Chapter 9: Blur
Anime & Comics · celestialshadows1
as always thank you for your review and support it is much appreciated
ch 0 8 Chapter 8: Fool you fool
Anime & Comics · celestialshadows1
hi I would appreciate it if I could see the list please every help is accepted to further the read experience
ch 0 7 Chapter 7: Let's get ready to rumble
Anime & Comics · celestialshadows1
alright love the story the concept the character and all of that if it is that you are translating please read through and make sure you have the right pronouns and gender for the characters the story is good overall though just fix the gender and pronouns issue it is quite annoying
Marvel: Mutant Paradise
Anime & Comics · BlackGoku222