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not*

"Wait? Why is the IAmTheStrongestReader writing anything?"

Aetheric Chronicles: Reborn As An Extra

Aetheric Chronicles: Reborn As An Extra

Fantasy · Peace_in_Chaos

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her* ---> his

Azariah feared her mother more than anything in this world.

Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son

Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son

Fantasy · Noob6_writer9

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Arlott knew the castle was big from the outside, but when he entered inside and looked above, his jaw slammed on the floor.

Hero To Overlord: Arlott the Unfettered!

Hero To Overlord: Arlott the Unfettered!

Fantasy · Eminent_Vellichor

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2. How would you rate the characters? (1-5)

The Survival of an Inferior

The Survival of an Inferior

Fantasy · S_Takeshi

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4

1. How much would you rate the plot thus far? (1-5)

The Survival of an Inferior

The Survival of an Inferior

Fantasy · S_Takeshi

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Jacob* ---> Edward

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I saw* my image

My hands were shaking and my heart was beating fast as I looked at that face I didn't know. I wondered who I was, the intangible who lay inside me. I my image in the mirror lost in the darkness that hovered in my room. That downcast, tired, disillusioned face was asking me, "Who am I?" And I didn't know the answer. I didn't know what I am or what I was looking for. I only knew that my heart was full of doubts and that I was unable to discover my identity.

Battle Academy: A Reincarnation for the End

Battle Academy: A Reincarnation for the End

Fantasy · Fabio_Henrique_5198

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Aurora* ---> Elona

"Falkrona Art," Aurora called out, raising her sword high in the air. Grey mana gathered at the tip of her blade.

I Am The Game's Villain

I Am The Game's Villain

Fantasy · NihilRuler

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some ---> woke

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please author...change his age or something this is way too rushed

I felt a little heavy in my heart when I heard those words. I could also see from the memories that the original Ethan was also very mature for his age and acted like a grown up kid instead. Maybe it was the environment that he grew up in that caused him to grow up faster.

Reborn as the Novel Heroine's Elder Brother

Reborn as the Novel Heroine's Elder Brother

Fantasy · Nezha_777

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Even so....It just sounds absurd

I finally got seated and started eating my breakfast. After finishing, I was about to get up when I heard the voice of my father, "Ethan, do you want to learn the way of sword?"

Reborn as the Novel Heroine's Elder Brother

Reborn as the Novel Heroine's Elder Brother

Fantasy · Nezha_777

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Leopold* ---> Leonard

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her* ---> his

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boyfriend* ---> girlfriend

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"would have" * ---> had

"If only those bitches would have helped us instead of abandoning us."

Surviving As An Extra In Fantasy World Isn't Easy

Surviving As An Extra In Fantasy World Isn't Easy

Fantasy · Mohitkumar

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