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As a student , I don't much fund of my own to use , i can only hope that this helps you

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Happy birthday sage

ik it's selfish of me saying this but i sometime wonder if sage can write 10 to 20 chapter a day , i am not saying he should but i am expresing my darkest desire , that's how good his chapters are , truely a lengd

Although I've only managed to read the first two chapters of your story and cannot fully comment on my liking for it, as a fellow novel enthusiast, I would like to offer some suggestions: 1. You mentioned in your narrative that 'no one can survive the void,' yet your title and summary clearly indicate that the pinnacle of cultivation is Transcendence, which I believe is inspired by JOTFDE. If this is the case, there may be entities capable of traversing the void as if it were their own backyard, especially if the protagonist is not the first to reach this realm in your story. I would recommend phrasing it as "...which only very few can survive" instead of "...which only one has survived." 2. Regarding the high-level fragment mentioned in your story, which appears to be near the peak of cultivation realms, it might be more plausible to suggest that a powerhouse noticed a sudden change in the fabric of destiny, fate, and the future, rather than directly detecting the fragment, unless the powerhouse is close to the realm of the fragments. Additionally, it's important not to have the fragment spoon feed the protagonist to greatness, like to Wang wei's only advantage of the Paragon Soul is giving high comprehension until he reaches the Paragon realm and his extraordinary willpower which he cannot use caually, which does not provide him with an unparalleled advantage. There are characters in that story are more fortunate, such as "Child of the Grand Dao," who most possibly is the son of heaven of entire chaosverse and even less nearly everyone from a somewhat good background in the upper realms possesses more resources than him, as for knowledge of Earth, he is not the sole beneficiary in history. 3. While it's clear that your work is inspired by JOTFDE, generating much anticipation, it's crucial not to become overly influenced by its plots. Instead, strive to create a unique blend of elements to avoid making the story tedious and predictable, which could result from mirroring the storyline and plots of JOTFDE too closely.

thank you for the chapter

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

tftc

ur alive??

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Thanks for chapter

tyftc

is it me , that finds the starting of this novel similar to "the Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor " , btw would love to read this story till end , Thanks for the chapter

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

and here i thought you died or something . btw thanks for the chapter

thank you for the chapter .. looking forward for the next chapter

u can also use grammerly

then use wordtune