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2022-05-17 Joined Czechia

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Hello everyone, It's been a month and over 30,000 words since I released the first chapters, since we're right in front of the 50k words mark, I feel it's time to do a decent review of what I think of the novel, myself. Before I start, I would like to say a few things. At first, I started writing out of boredom, but before I knew it, I was absorbed in my own story and I started to enjoy writing for the story itself. It was both fun and pain sometimes going from work to writing, from writing to bed, and back to work, every.single.day. However, I still managed to deliver quite a lot of chapters, even though it was my first time writing. So let's see what I think about the novel so far. The first ten chapters are both good and bad. They are sophisticated but not perfectly delivered, there are grammatical errors and some chapters are boring to read. However, lately, I've been trying to go through them again and polish them as much as I can without changing any information for people who have already read them. If you survive those chapters the writing should get better with each chapter, it's still a bit messy until chapter 25 or 26 when I started to pay a lot more attention to how I write. The progress of the story is a bit slower, but from the 19th chapter, you can look forward to a series of actions. But don't worry because some of the actions are in the earlier chapters as well. I've also increased the word count in each chapter with almost every new release. Or at least compared to the first 10 chapters. With the current latest chapter, I delivered what I wanted. And we can now start a new saga. A saga of friendship and companions, rivals and enemies, and much more. Please look forward to the next chapters.

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Replied to haremphobic

Verm is just old perv :)

Verm dreamed about a paradise, as he was sleeping peacefully in his bed. A paradise full of beautiful women, one of that beauties was feeding him with sweet strawberries.

Birth of Second World: Online

Birth of Second World: Online

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trash, said who?

[Mystical Bowsman (locked - requirement not met)]

Birth of Second World: Online

Birth of Second World: Online

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Replied to Alpha_Idiot

Will fix it, thanks!

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Birth of Second World: Online

Birth of Second World: Online

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Replied to RealmWriter

I just noticed that it was wrongly explained. It was supposed to be a "pause between VR helmet usage expanded from every second day to every third day". Thanks for noticing.

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Birth of Second World: Online

Birth of Second World: Online

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Replied to RealmWriter

Will keep that in the mind. Thank you

-Because the weapon is damaged there is a higher chance to miss an attack

Birth of Second World: Online

Birth of Second World: Online

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