Badges 6
Moments 102
Why do you have to make him a loser and bullied ?
ch 0 2 DO YOU ACCEPT?
A Realm Transcendent
Fantasy 路 Sikawa
Friendship is overrated
How long had it been since he could truly relax? The memories of the bloodshed and schemes in Divine World flooded his mind. Many friends were made, but they, too, abandoned him when he fell from the top.
Reincarnation of the Strongest Healer
Games 路 Idczhen
truck kun the master in the art of murder/transmigration
He heard some rustling sounds as he crossed the dark road, narrowing his eyes, he looked over and in that instant, his life flashed before his eyes as a massive truck sped towards him.
Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
Fantasy 路 WinterDragon_1
Why a beast class again and tbh you need to improve your writing, your pronunciation and everything is good but the way you explain stuff still needs improvement ,you miss alot of crucial point that can improve reading for readers
ch 25 (XXV) Forbidden Beast Master
Reincarnated as the Strongest NPC
Fantasy 路 One_Winged_Angel
You should go correct this now or else you will keep trying to explain
"Many of you may not have known the arduous journey young Leon Astrahart has completed to appear today!" He said, his voice echoing, "Ten years ago, he was stricken with the uncurable Mana Poisoning disease!"
Reincarnated as the Strongest NPC
Fantasy 路 One_Winged_Angel
I don't like how you make the MC super dumb around this aiden guy, he inspected everything he came across, even the mage so why not the villager who gain free will, can you kindly lmk if this story will be about someone manipulating the mC?
ch 27 End of the Quest
NPC Gamer: Dominating the VRMMORPG With my AI
Games 路 SIRE_
TF? 馃え
ch 0 6 First Quest.
I Rose From Rags To Riches After Receiving The Wealth System
Fantasy 路 Jeffson
A bit generic since the MC is at the bottom of the food chain, but good job with the first chap馃挴
ch 0 1 Malivoire Descent.
Malivoire Descent
Fantasy 路 Dream_Lord14
Thought he had no emotion馃様
ch 0 9 Chapter 9: The plan part 2
Automaton Magi-Replica : In the new world with a robot creation system
Fantasy 路 Chronicle27
It's still too exagegerated... adjust it
After that, he lived his days completely shut off from communicating with anyone, even the terrible nurses who treated him badly and verbally abused him, knowing he couldn't defend himself. It wasn't until one day a lifeline appeared in the form of his professor from the university he had previously attended.
Automaton Magi-Replica : In the new world with a robot creation system
Fantasy 路 Chronicle27
Why's it all in past tense ?
ch 0 1 Advent of Astral Part 1: Creation
Astral's Adventures
Sci-fi 路 Le_King_James
Hmmm a possible omnipotent being making so many mistakes ?
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Eye Of Intent
Eastern 路 ROYAL_SOUNDS
Your writing skills needs improvement ,you should re write these pages later when you think your writing skill is good enough
they lid of the bin ripped off violently I looked up see my end before me and what I saw made my blood run cold. 5 meters tall, a white chitinous body with tan accents down its front and sides spikes decorated throughout, 4 legs each one ending with a sharp thick spike which could run a man through with ease a vertical torso with 2 scythe like appendages sharp enough clearly to cut through metal with no resistance, A head in a shape similar to a pentagon with small protrusions sticking out of the top in a row, teeth like ivory needles drenched in saliva and eyes black as void staring down into his own.
The hivemind is conquering for me?
Sci-fi 路 Ben_Cresswell
You need to correct those small mistakes you made in the prologue, there's aleast 2 or sum mistakes in the first 4 sentence
Rebirth: The Villainous Young Master Doesn't Want to Follow the Script
Fantasy 路 empressblackrose09