very very dumb decision and thinking process
ch 17 Progress After A Month
Fantasy 路 Excommunicated
No original body memories ?
ch 0 2 My First Quest
Action 路 Kelvin_A
change the title if you can?
ch 0 1 Welcome To My Shitty Life!
Action 路 Kelvin_A
Why does this sound so dumb?
Wait, what? I won against the most overpowered MC ever? Sure, he held back on his full mana power, Gift's active ability, and his weapon art, but still, I managed to outdo the protagonist.
Fantasy 路 WhiteDeath16
Why do you have to make him a loser and bullied ?
ch 0 2 DO YOU ACCEPT?
Fantasy 路 Sikawa
Friendship is overrated
How long had it been since he could truly relax? The memories of the bloodshed and schemes in Divine World flooded his mind. Many friends were made, but they, too, abandoned him when he fell from the top.
Games 路 Idczhen
truck kun the master in the art of murder/transmigration
He heard some rustling sounds as he crossed the dark road, narrowing his eyes, he looked over and in that instant, his life flashed before his eyes as a massive truck sped towards him.
Fantasy 路 WinterDragon_1
Why a beast class again and tbh you need to improve your writing, your pronunciation and everything is good but the way you explain stuff still needs improvement ,you miss alot of crucial point that can improve reading for readers
ch 25 (XXV) Forbidden Beast Master
Fantasy 路 One_Winged_Angel
You should go correct this now or else you will keep trying to explain
"Many of you may not have known the arduous journey young Leon Astrahart has completed to appear today!" He said, his voice echoing, "Ten years ago, he was stricken with the uncurable Mana Poisoning disease!"
Fantasy 路 One_Winged_Angel
I don't like how you make the MC super dumb around this aiden guy, he inspected everything he came across, even the mage so why not the villager who gain free will, can you kindly lmk if this story will be about someone manipulating the mC?
ch 27 End of the Quest
Games 路 SIRE_
TF? 馃え
ch 0 6 First Quest.
Fantasy 路 Jeffson
To what end? He was prepared to give them his wallet without violence so this statement doesn't make sense
To them, he was nothing more than an obstacle, a means to an end.
God Breaker: The Ersatz Messiah
Fantasy 路 Freakshow