TF? 馃え
ch 0 6 First Quest.
Fantasy 路 Jeffson
A bit generic since the MC is at the bottom of the food chain, but good job with the first chap馃挴
ch 0 1 Malivoire Descent.
Fantasy 路 Dream_Lord14
Thought he had no emotion馃様
ch 0 9 Chapter 9: The plan part 2
Fantasy 路 Chronicle27
It's still too exagegerated... adjust it
After that, he lived his days completely shut off from communicating with anyone, even the terrible nurses who treated him badly and verbally abused him, knowing he couldn't defend himself. It wasn't until one day a lifeline appeared in the form of his professor from the university he had previously attended.
Fantasy 路 Chronicle27
Why's it all in past tense ?
ch 0 1 Advent of Astral Part 1: Creation
Sci-fi 路 Le_King_James
Hmmm a possible omnipotent being making so many mistakes ?
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Eastern 路 ROYAL_SOUNDS
Your writing skills needs improvement ,you should re write these pages later when you think your writing skill is good enough
they lid of the bin ripped off violently I looked up see my end before me and what I saw made my blood run cold. 5 meters tall, a white chitinous body with tan accents down its front and sides spikes decorated throughout, 4 legs each one ending with a sharp thick spike which could run a man through with ease a vertical torso with 2 scythe like appendages sharp enough clearly to cut through metal with no resistance, A head in a shape similar to a pentagon with small protrusions sticking out of the top in a row, teeth like ivory needles drenched in saliva and eyes black as void staring down into his own.
Sci-fi 路 Ben_Cresswell
you made mistakes on the names again who's lith?
ch 22 So, How Do I Cook It?
Fantasy 路 The_Primal_Scribe
is it dara or jada? you dey mix the names my bro
ch 18 Hellish Training
Fantasy 路 The_Primal_Scribe
Good novel! If you don't feel like it a stress then can you make the origin codex system like, just show his status, treasures , bloodline and stuff .just like the primordial record. ...it's not a system but i can calculate and record his grow like a system status. .. JS
ch 17 Blowing His Cover
Fantasy 路 The_Primal_Scribe
is it not a game? where is his status?
ch 12 You Can't Use Me Girl
Games 路 That_Cultivator
TF馃様
Veron stood stone still, he wouldn't miss the next words out of her mouth for anything. His entire new domain could be crumbling and yet he wouldn't care. He had to know what she was going to say, and damned be the consequences.
Sci-fi 路 Billy_Bunn_5040
dwarf as the most affinity for earth
ch 0 5 The 7 Paragons (part 2)
Sci-fi 路 Billy_Bunn_5040
馃え馃
"Here is where you will make the core of your world. You will place your hands on the sphere whereupon the creation system will be bound to you, and you will be given access to all the features available to rank 1 gods. You will learn more about those ranks and their abilities later on, but for now just focus on building the world you want to make. Now remember, to this new world you ARE God. Set whatever rules you like, make things the way you want them to be. But be warned, the rules you make will bind you. God cannot break his own law."
Sci-fi 路 Billy_Bunn_5040
Where is this story going exactly ?
ch 36 The Offer
Fantasy 路 BS_Entertainment
I don't like how you make the MC super dumb around this aiden guy, he inspected everything he came across, even the mage so why not the villager who gain free will, can you kindly lmk if this story will be about someone manipulating the mC?
ch 27 End of the Quest
NPC Gamer: Dominating the VRMMORPG With my AI
Games 路 SIRE_