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DaoistLORD_PARAGON

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I don't know how to write but i am very observant to silly mistakes so imma correct you if i find some and if your story is a disappointment not reaching my expectations I'll definitely abuse you

2022-05-18 Joined Nigeria

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Why does this sound so dumb?

Wait, what? I won against the most overpowered MC ever? Sure, he held back on his full mana power, Gift's active ability, and his weapon art, but still, I managed to outdo the protagonist.

An Unordinary Extra

An Unordinary Extra

Fantasy · WhiteDeath16

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Friendship is overrated

How long had it been since he could truly relax? The memories of the bloodshed and schemes in Divine World flooded his mind. Many friends were made, but they, too, abandoned him when he fell from the top.

Reincarnation of the Strongest Healer

Reincarnation of the Strongest Healer

Games · Idczhen

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truck kun the master in the art of murder/transmigration

He heard some rustling sounds as he crossed the dark road, narrowing his eyes, he looked over and in that instant, his life flashed before his eyes as a massive truck sped towards him.

Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!

Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!

Fantasy · WinterDragon_1

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You should go correct this now or else you will keep trying to explain

"Many of you may not have known the arduous journey young Leon Astrahart has completed to appear today!" He said, his voice echoing, "Ten years ago, he was stricken with the uncurable Mana Poisoning disease!"

Reincarnated as the Strongest NPC

Reincarnated as the Strongest NPC

Fantasy · One_Winged_Angel

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It's still too exagegerated... adjust it

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Hmmm a possible omnipotent being making so many mistakes ?

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Eye Of Intent

Eye Of Intent

Eastern · ROYAL_SOUNDS

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