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Elona_Alone
LV 1Holla. Nothing much to say. I write romance novel mixed with comedy. Kindly check it out.... wink
2022-05-23 Joined NigeriaBadges 4
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It seemed you always forget to put full before the quotation ending
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I must admit, this is getting more interesting . Definitely adding it to my Library 馃挄
"You live under my roof, you follow my rules!! Bedelia watched her leave afterward as she slammed the door behind her.
Deepest Shadow
Fantasy 路 Casey_Bae
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"Yeah, I do... he was laughing now while I shut my eyes to get some sleep, they're just like two opposite ends.
Deepest Shadow
Fantasy 路 Casey_Bae
Aww 馃ズ
"Jace!! Bedelia called and heard him laugh, Of course, he already knows why she had called him. And without saying any more word to him, he walked over to her bed and laid right next to me while placing his arms around her and gently cuddling her to sleep, finally she was somewhere safe.
Deepest Shadow
Fantasy 路 Casey_Bae
He said
"She's going nowhere, Getty," I said interrupting them both
Deepest Shadow
Fantasy 路 Casey_Bae
No quotation mark here馃槄
"I don't think it safe for her to stay at the orphanage anymore, she hurt a kid and I'm afraid of what she'll do next...who was talking to?
Deepest Shadow
Fantasy 路 Casey_Bae
No quotation mark.
"Jace! Bedelia heard me call in seconds, he was the only person that could get her out of there, to save her from herself.
Deepest Shadow
Fantasy 路 Casey_Bae
jeez
And when she finally got to look around, she found a drip attached to her wrist and a hang cuff at the other wrist.
Deepest Shadow
Fantasy 路 Casey_Bae
you forgot to put this (") at the end of this statement
"How dare you hurt Jace! I yelled at him and watched him burst out into more tears which I didn't want and certainly wasn't interested in.
Deepest Shadow
Fantasy 路 Casey_Bae
woah 馃槄 he really is terrified
" I'm...I'm sorry.. please.. I didn't mean to" He pleaded as his back reached and got stranded on the wall .The fear in his eyes sang loudly at me and I enjoyed every bit of it while frowning bitterly at him. Watching him shiver at my glare was something I dearly wanted. I looked down at his teary eyes and then down beneath his shaking body and saw as he had pissed his pants.
Deepest Shadow
Fantasy 路 Casey_Bae
Sometimes fairytales are real馃槀
聽It sounded like a fairy tale when the shit became real. Yein stood up with all the broken bones in his body, like a movie trick but in real life then i yelled out to Yein saying... i cant be like you, you have courage and hope, why me im too scared to even try. Then we heard a loud roar from the monster. You little rat go on your knees, then i may not kill you but turn you to one of my slaves.
3 days before death
Action 路 Daoisti3aEZz
Too much exclamation mark
Kazuya that oath is what keeps me going every day, even when i know im ganna get beat up or when聽 i may not have enything to eat for that day, that saying is what keeps me going. that saying is what makes me stronger and with that saying and聽 with all the broken bones in my body i shall..."RIIIISSSSEEEEE!!!!!".
3 days before death
Action 路 Daoisti3aEZz
Yup. most friends this days are pest and it's becoming common in the world 馃槀馃槀
聽 So immediaty i called all the contacts i had on my phone. But to the shock of my life they all said the same thing which were"i do not want to be involed with you nor a demon"". What a shame at my path, people i called friends could'nt leave what they were doing to help save me, these werent friends they were pests just sapping me from the little i had. Then i realised that i had 1 contact left i hadnt called which was Yein, ow but Yein would'nt pick it , after all i've said,he would just ignore it. But i called him enyway. to my greatest supprise he picked the call,i was so shocked that i became dumbfounded for 2 whole minute. Then he said in a cool tone like we never had an argument
3 days before death
Action 路 Daoisti3aEZz
Dear . This is the mistakes you made . "I love you Jack" instead of "I love you Jack." Try reading that chapter again to understand what I'm saying