Webnovel Author: Yuu_Fall - Novel Collection

4mth

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It's good. Even though i've read the same plot as the other Chinese novel out there, it's good. Kudos for you

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4mth

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That was good. I didn't understand the first sentence of the synopsis, but after i read the story, damn. I'm flabbergasted. I usually don't read this kind of story but the way Author-san tell her/his story is amazing like you can see the characters and the background in an ultra HD TV. I skipped some of it due to how detailed Author-san tell on the characters suit, dress, accessories, their expression. This is clearly not a amateur writing. This is top notch for people with etiquette.

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Yuu_Fall

9mth

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it's good overall but can you please give us(The Readers) a sign on where is the plot coming. It was perfect at the first chapter but after I read the next chapter my reaction was kinda "huh?" moments cause I was lost and after reading a few paragraphs I understand that the chapter 2 is still part of the wedding scene, while the chapter 1 was a quick summary of the story.It's good.I'm just showing a honest review, nothing else.