Webnovel Author: Kofi_ - Novel Collection

I'm thinking single fl for now, but we'll see...

The hero is a fighter who specialize in aura instead of mana. And he just watched the memories, not to totally experienced it. To use magic, 'real' experience is needed. Also, there is a first for everything right? Hopes that answers your question.

it's in the synopsis haha it's not revealed yet in early chaps

what i mean is so much descriptive words but there are little impact, as you said this is a human fighting for the first time. also try to split long paragraphs too as it will make the fight more engaging. that's just my opinion tho. have a nice day

Man so much descriptive words for attacking rats

I say he's doing good

Finally man, hopefully other readers won't be bored on your info dumping on first chapters

Full of info dumps but ok

Alright good start

Uhh I mean restricted characters like chinese, jap, or kor characters. Also, I think your novel has not been vetted yet because of that so I advice removing those

Now that mc's on a mission but the chap is too long. Split it into 1k-1.5k if you don't want readers to get bored

This chapter cleared my confusion but I advice to remove some unwanted characters tho

I honestly don't understand what's going on but I'm hype yea?

Nice fight scene