Thank you for the review. Unfortunately, rewriting takes more time, so it would be hard. I can only improve the writing in the upcoming chapters only. I can only recommend you to skip the particular volume if you want to keep reading my work. I'm trying to improve my writing skills through the reviews from the readers. Again, thank you for the feedback.
This book has been deleted.
That will be the next volume. I'm thinking about two main characters (one male/one female) in the same story.