Webnovel Author: UnKnownEntity001 - Novel Collection

The romance.

This chapter was rough to read. I think I threw up a bit.

If undead such as is wraiths are going to play a large part in the story then yes use the undead tag.

Again tags. Add the UNDEAD tag

Author are you so lazy that you can’t even add tags to your story? Is it action and adventure? Is the mc a villain, anti-hero or hero? Is there a system? Is there romance? If readers see a story with no tags they are likely just going to move on without giving it a chance.

Yeah I get that. Was just hoping we would see some change in the mcs mentality, even small changes.

So the mc has no control over literally anything??

What is with all these †symbols? Really breaking the immersion when there is multiple per paragraph.

My issue so far with the story is it’s tagged as villain but the mc seems more of an anti-hero to hero. Nothing truly villainous, helping people and not really getting anything in return.

I kinda like the admiral ngl, sure he’s a jerk and sometimes cowardly. But dude knows what he wants and will do anything to get it. Which I can respect.

So dude isn’t actually a villain, it’s the system twisting his words to make him seem evil. Well that’s disappointing. I like the concept of different types of souls though. It’s hilarious though that the admiral says the blue devils don’t have souls and then immediately suggests sacrificing one’s soul lol.