Hello, :3 The name's Clover; I'm a new writer who loves reading as much as writing. I hope people can enjoy my work and watch as I grow into a better writer.
2022-06-16 Joined Global
This is what the battlefield looks like, if anyone's wondering:
It had a big crystal chandelier hanging in the middle and emerald green curtains on the windows. The floor was shiny and glossy; in the middle two guys charged at eachother with immense speed, and as they did, cheers coming from the audience echoed throughout the room.
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If anyone's curious, this is what it looks like: (Image's not mine btw)
The demon towered over her, it stepped closer, pushing Servare back. It was a giant minotaur, holding an equally large sword.
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Cya and her group got their abilities a long time ago, as well as most of the other students. Arzino's gifted academy doesn't have a specific enrollment period; anybody can enroll whenever, as long as they match the requirements, so most of the students got enrolled a few years back and had time to learn new skills/abilities and train them, unlike Servare, who is both new at being a gifted and attending the Academy. Sorry if I didn't make this clear enough.
"Fire creation (Lv. 13), Fire manipulation (Lv. 13)"
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Dunno why this is here either.
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Dunno why this is here. Can't remove it for some reason.
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Good review 👍
That's amazing. I didn't think anybody could figure it out, although now, everyone knows what it means. Oh well, it's not that important anyways—good job on figuring it out.
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What? For real? How?
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Haha, don't worry it'll get revealed later on.
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This is written so well; I wish this were more popular!
ch 0 3 Storm Signs (2)
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Great first chapter! Hooked me right from the start.
ch 0 1 Warning Signs
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Thank you, I'll try to post longer chapters every other day :)
Just a question for the 3 people waiting, would you rather I post everyday but the chapters are short or I post every other day but the chapters are long?
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Fifth chapter and still no major mistakes; I promised to proofread 5 chapters, and today I just finished proofreading the fifth; well to be honest, it was more like reading than proofreading since I didn't really fix anything. But what I'm trying to say is, I will no longer be a proofreader but instead a regular reader. I hope to read more amazing chapters from you, my friend.
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I appreciate the compliment, thank you very much. <3
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I tried to find any major errors worth pointing out, but I inevitably failed. My greatest fear might've just come true; I may no longer be needed. I'm very happy for you; you improved so much. I will keep trying to find any mistakes but I'm pretty sure I won't find that many.
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"and create equipment for himself." Remove "an" from the sentence and you're good. You haven't made a mistake since the last one, i'm impressed. Truly, I can't believe you improved this much within such a small time span. I'm afraid you might not need me anymore, heh.
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"opened the door and entered (the shed.) The smell of alcohol (filled every inch of it,) (making him think about the) hellish life (he once lived.)"
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"There were only torn carpets and empty alcohol bottles on the floor." You don't have to change this, the original one is okay; this is all optional.
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The image is not mine btw.
It had a big crystal chandelier hanging in the middle and emerald green curtains on the windows. The floor was shiny and glossy; in the middle two guys charged at eachother with immense speed, and as they did, cheers coming from the audience echoed throughout the room.
The Moon's Blessing
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