Omg the story seems really nice... I still think that FL mother is kind of scary tho 😕
ch 0 1 Prologue: The Prophecy.
Fantasy · Harleeyah24
Well people could use her dark side for their own benefits and they would be scared from her so it's better if she hides it
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: A bittersweet party ending
History · aleksandra_pano10
Nope I just like japanese culture a lot ✨
The worst part is that the participants will go to the most dangerous places in Astaroth empire where they must collect one gem from each place. Haruto is the first son of Hinodo family so he's the one who should participate in this competition.
History · aleksandra_pano10
Girl why didn't I thought that before 😣
ch 10 Chapter 10: The uninvited guest
History · aleksandra_pano10
I'm sorry that your friend used your phobia as advantage 😣. I also used to have that fear but somehow as a introvert I'm used to be alone so I don't have that phobia anymore 🙂
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Not a very happy childhood (part 2)
History · aleksandra_pano10
You're right they are intentional! I'm so happy that someone is understanding my writing style cause it can be a little confusing but I think it makes story more interesting 😅
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Not a very happy childhood (part 2)
History · aleksandra_pano10
Her mood switches because of her other personality or her dark side Toshiba cause she still can't fully control her emotions and powers
ch 0 4 Chaper 4: Not a very happy childhood
History · aleksandra_pano10
You're right! Toshiba is Ryoko's other personality and he shows up when she's really emotional this is why he showed up in those moments
ch 0 4 Chaper 4: Not a very happy childhood
History · aleksandra_pano10
Brothers are always annoying 😂😂
ch 0 4 Chaper 4: Not a very happy childhood
History · aleksandra_pano10
I would say yes and no. Inside her lives a demon and when Ryoko is scared, mad or really nervous he takes the control of her body
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: A bittersweet party ending
History · aleksandra_pano10
The fake Axel was actually Toshiba Ryoko's dark side. He was masked as Axel to trick her but Ryoko found out who he really was.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: A bittersweet party ending
History · aleksandra_pano10
Thank you 😊 Actually my writing style isn't typical webnovel writing style this is why so many people are confused about it 😅
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: A bittersweet party ending
History · aleksandra_pano10
Ryoko isn't fully possessed she has her dark side which is a evil demon ( Toshiba) as a kind of Shinigami. Ryoko can control him but sometimes she loses the control and her dark side possessed her
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: A bittersweet party ending
History · aleksandra_pano10
Actually it was Yuto who was telling Ryoko to wake up cause she fainted. Ryoko was still dizzy and she couldn't really hear him well so you're right.. it was some kind of whispers 😅
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: The secret room
History · aleksandra_pano10
Sorry it was a gramatical mistake Yuto and Edgar are the same person
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: The secret room
History · aleksandra_pano10
Hm this story was actually better than I expected! At first when I read synopsis I thought it would be a little boring but the first chapter was actually really intriguing and creepy.. it gave me chills and I loved it! Still I think that you should rewrite the synopsis do you'll attract more readers. Definitely gonna add it in my library
Aithne: Daughter of the Flame
Fantasy · Harleeyah24