Looks like I'm spending more time on editing! Apologies for the grammar.
ch 0 4 Chapter 4: Visitors
Fantasy 路 Ecaw
communism
The government had been forced to develop a comprehensive social welfare system in order to insure everyone's basic safety and lifestyle. Now, a single institution, Skynet, had been put in place to monitor everyone and everything with a harsh and even eye. Its influence extended across all sections of society, and general crime had fallen greatly under the ever-watching eye of Skynet's monitors.
Games 路 Sheng Xiao Jian Ke
exp I assume
[Spirit points: 0/50]
Fantasy 路 Dexter_Sled_1111
PAUSE
"As for the goblin corpses, forget it, they're worthless!"
Fantasy 路 Golden Disc
p-e-d-o 馃槖
[Alright, only during free time!]
Fantasy 路 Golden Disc
kys ^^
Countless Castle lords were shocked, and they even scolded Mike for being a profiteer...
Fantasy 路 Golden Disc
"echowed"
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Fantasy 路 Zurbluris
"prist"
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Fantasy 路 Zurbluris
"Hamds"
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Fantasy 路 Zurbluris
the plants prob mutated
The green leaves here were lush, and the branches and leaves had grown too much. They even blocked the light above and only threads of light could pass through the gaps and scatter in, but they were unable to give the wolf pack any warmth.
Sci-fi 路 Oak Peter
ikr lmao
grimace.. :)
A grimace spread across his face as his gaze moved to the floor, where he noticed a pair of dark-green colored feet, each with five grotesque toenails covered in filth and dirt.
Fantasy 路 DonnEll
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ch 0 4 Chapter 4: Visitors
LIBRARIAN For The GODS
Fantasy 路 Ecaw