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The chapter is fun to read and I like the attention to detail. Just a small thing I want to say and that's just my opinion ...there are a lot of consecutive sentences starting with "I". You can maybe fuse them together to make the writing more crisp and compact. Again, just my opinion.
ch 0 2 A Surprise
Fantasy · The_WindChaser
and you made me hungry lol
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Fantasy · The_WindChaser
Nice prologue. Excited to read ahead.
ch 0 1 Prologue: El Terra
Fantasy · The_WindChaser
Thank you I will try to implement some changes according to your suggestions.
The Bloodhound knows no peace
Action · Rouhingan