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Kai Morgan, the protagonist of this story, has always been an innocent and intelligent young boy who has his own set of fears. He strives for knowledge about the land he lives in, especially Arcana: A magical energy that varies from one element to another. Water cannot be destroyed, while Earth cannot be created, etc.
He will experience friendship and love while having a carefree and joyous life throughout his youth. Yet, he lives in a world he doesn't truly know. A world where those who are oppressed will soon bare their fangs against those who owns them. Lands that are so perilous and requires him to use all of his strength and wits to survive.
A world... of ups and more downs than he can handle. But when he loses those that he loves and his home, a miracle will happen that will prevent him from losing every fiber of his sanity: A cat that is his only and can only speak with him through his mind.
It is time for his journey to be known how he will become... The Wizard of the Seas.
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(Future) Excerpt:
"What is grief, if not the preservation of love?"
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Tags: Fantasy, Adventure, Campus, Action, Magic, Romance, War & Military, Thriller
(My goal is to have the mc of this story to be 3D. He will develop throughout the entire story, feeling different emotions that will hit him.)
(The cover art isn't mine. If you are its creator and want it to be removed, please contact me on Discord. Thank you. Discord: #0086 a universal sonata)
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When reading the story the only problem I had was the POV. Sometimes while I am in the middle of the chapter it gets a little confusing as the POV is not very clear. The writing style is dofferent but the formation of sentences can difinitely be worked on. For example, when writing a dialogue try mentioning the emotion in which the characters says it. It makes it easier to understand the emotion your characters feel during the conversation. Try explaning the body langugae too. For instance, *he walked away lazily, swaying side to side as if he were drunk...* this shows that the character is not very interested in his/her surroundings. Although your punctuations are good. The story is definitely a lot more than one can expect from it.
An awesome starting. I think author has kept in mind the world building which most authors forget here. The starting is slow but I am sure it will be worth it. I like there's mystery surrounding everything that grips you into reading more.
You have a great sense of writing details and making it flow through scenes smoothly. It felt like I was watching a movie. I like the characters as they felt real. And I already left some criticisms on chapters that need improving. Overall, Great Writing!
The novel starts on a bright and cheerful note. The characters are vibrant and I am sure we will get to know more and more about them as the novel progresses. kudos to the author for having grasped the concept that world-building is the most important thing in fantasy novels. The prologue promises great things to come. Keep up the good work. Will come back soon
Greetings! This novel has just started out, and I'm a new writer. Yay! I'm giving this five stars because it's my work, but I know that I still have shortcomings. I hope you guys could point out those that I don't notice. Lastly, I will try to excel in giving you guys both a smooth and comfortable read as I serve you guys a wonderful story. Enjoy!