Webnovel Author: KingPablo - Novel Collection

This is dope. As someone who isn't immersed in romantic books I ended up wanting to see more of this teenage love play out. Strange way to lose virginity but understandable and mixed with the emotions it is very real. Use of prose is on point with only room to grow, no downsides about the writing style. The plot is simple and yet capturing, I just love it. Thanks author for this, keep going fam.

Beautiful story with secrets, plots and emotions .I like it, it's a wonderful story.

I'm not used to this genre but this book is lit. A nice story that catches the audience. The flow is fantastic.Nice one fam.

Story wise I think you have something going on, you have good imagination so I know you definitely got magic. You need some polishing tho, I get confused sometimes because of the grammar and writing style. For the a first timer in this genre, you have got something. I know this is going to be dope going forward.

It is a nice read, the writing itself is good but the arrangement is a bit off. Seems to be a mixture of science and magic. Can't wait to see where it leads.

I like it. Your writing style is on point. The book moves in a nice pace, it flows well making us want to know what next. I think it is really good so far.