This is actually great. I enjoy this so much. I can see this is something you worked hard on and it really shows. Keep up the good work and I hope you continue working hard
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Urban · Altansarnai
Great work! I love how every character is unique and you made it your own. There are a few grammar mistakes but overall the story is really good. Keep it up!
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