Not bad And in fact when it comes to word arrangement ur is better than mine.... But I want to also point out somethings like:plot, world design,character design that's way I have seen that needs improvement for now (but will update if there is more) Sign:ZAIDUX
ch 0 1 PROLOGUE
Urban · NobleRemmy
A nice book for a man who wrote it Appaulds
ch 0 1 Miss Bride
Fantasy · Author Enigwe
Pls read my book
ch 0 1 Chapter 1; story(part 1):the story of the past
Fantasy · Zaidux
Thank you for ur honest review
The rise of a legendary warlock
Fantasy · Zaidux