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PuckGoodfellow
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I'll fix the typos tomorrow. Thank you for your feedback. What is your general opinion about the story?
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The Merchant
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Noted. 馃挭馃徑
"A kilo of salt is a hundred dollars, how much gold can I make with that?"
The Merchant
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What do you think about the story?
"A kilo of salt is a hundred dollars, how much gold can I make with that?"
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Spelling errors have been corrected. Thanks for your precious comment!
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The Merchant
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Don't think in today's market. Market prices with stories are higher.
"A kilo of salt is a hundred dollars, how much gold can I make with that?"
The Merchant
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Do you have any suggestions, which word would be more appropriate? English is not my first language, so I can make mistakes.
Luck remembered a saying, 'He who f*cks his secretary pours his tea' and it fit the situation perfectly.
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Thank you. Please let me know if you find any other typos:) You can also write your general opinion about the story, thanks again.
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The Merchant
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I don't fully understand your question, but here's how I can answer it. Luck is doing the first thing that comes to his mind and that is selling food, and as time goes by he will realize what he can do by traveling between two worlds.
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